Don Coon Imperator

Joined: 12 Apr 2006 Posts: 2742
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 4:05 am Post subject: 010715 comments pg 72-finish |
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14.5 In game points scored add "of body" at the end of both of the first two
lines.
14.5 line 5 - add "(VP)" after "Victory Points". You use the VP acronym
later and it is never defined.
15.0 Line 1 makes no sense. half the combined score of what?
15.0 This has subpara 12.51 in it.
16.12 "(5.x)" should be "(5.221)", "(8.x)" should be "(8.93)", and "(13.x)"
should be "(10.4)".
16.27 "(5.xxx)" should be "(5.221)"
18.5 add "at the end of the bound" to the end of the first sentance. If you
do not do this, the second sentance can never occur.
Thats it. Have fun Jon.
Don
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