Warrior Ancient and Medieval Rules

[Don Coon]

10.1 Casualty table. 9 figs at a 4 is 26. Should be 27 for proper
mathematical progression.

10.3 6th para 2nd sentance - delete "double ridden" 1 time. It is repeated.

10.6 last para. "2 i.c. (x.xx)" should be "2IC (4.11)".

11.1 line under bullet list - reword to " A body under WAIT orders MUST
charge unprompted if able to..."

The way you have this written now "take the above action" is confusing. We
all think you mean the last bullet, but the rewording leaves no doubt.

11.2 In the Who may (or must ) pursue para. Reword 6th line to:

The following are not required to, but have the option to pursue:
- Regular close formation foot
- Any regular foot who originally stood to receive a foot charge (and have
not since followed up).

This cleans up a pesky "or" sentance that is worded badly. Bullets are
better than "or" in almost every case!

11.2 Escheloning - add a reference back to para (6.1 somewhere in here.
Preferably after the word echelon in the first sentance.

12.22 Items 4 and 5. Reword so that "hours" is before the number. i.e
"hours 4-11", "hours 1-3 and hours 11-12". This way I know what hours of
the day you are talking about. The way you have it worded, it looks like a
duration.

12.42 LOS. Something needs to be said about how much of something has to be
seen, to be in LOS. If the answere is a gnats ass, then this para should
say something to that effect. We call this partial LOS. We play that if
part of me can see part of you, we can see each other, no matter how small
the part we can see is.

14.31 Minor water feature - "carves" should be "curves". "width mist not"
should be "width must not"

14.31 Unfortified built over area - "moved cut of the" should be "moved out
of the"

14.31 Hill para. 1st sentance - Reword to "A distinction is made between
hills proper and lower features which are called rises, low ridges, and
knolls." This reads much smoother.

14.31 Road para - delete "assumed" from "and fords are assumed to be" We do
not assume in this game, we do.

14.31 Combining features para. You have a nomenclature mismatch. Reword
sentance 2 to "....superimposed on rounded hills, rises, low ridges, or
knolls."

14.4 Competition deployment. This whole section leaves me wondering what
noncompetition deployment might be like? Is my kitchen a competition
deployment? If so why is this section not just titled "deployment"?

14.41 "tines" should be "times"

14.44. Does a camp count as a unit for demoralization?

14.44 4th para. How do you destroy or break a camp?

14.45 2nd para, 2nd sentance. Reword to "A flank march on a given flank
must" Trust me, you need to reword this. The way you have it written, some
yahoo is going to claim his flank marchs declared on both flanks does not
have to be 1 unit or command beacuase it is not on "A SINGLE FLANK".

14.45 para 3 - "(5.xx)" should be "(5.31)"

Thats it for now. Will finish this task next time.